One thing I probably need to add more of in my final essay would be more observations of people and their interactions with others at the dining hall. I should also talk a little more about the types of people who work at the seven restaurants at West End. Are they students or adults and are they polite or rude. One pattern I am beginning to see in my essays is how I can now tell the time of day that west end is crowded compared to when it is empty. I have also can tell when certain groups of people come into west end such as the athletes.
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